Cadas - Part IV

     Here are the two video renditions of the double sonnet:

"This Won't Make Sense" (unannotated)

This Won't Make Sense (Unannotated) from Earl Gray on Vimeo.


"This Won't Make Sense" (annotated)

This Won't Make Sense (annotated) from Earl Gray on Vimeo.


     Obviously, the video format can't hide as much as the text does, especially without the last couplet (as we saw in "Cadas - Part IIa").  This could be a rare inversion:  the poem may work better as text or audio-only first.  There is also the TMI issue:  how much information is too much?

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